diff --git a/content/stories/protecting-light.rst b/content/stories/protecting-light.rst index 2c9eb33..d38bc4f 100644 --- a/content/stories/protecting-light.rst +++ b/content/stories/protecting-light.rst @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ herself from the outer world. “But it hurts!” she replied, almost crying. -No, it’s the mist that burns you. Seal! Stronger!” +“No, it’s the mist that burns you. Seal! Stronger!” She focused, but the mist was biting her everywhere as if a desert storm was blowing tiny grains of sand through her body. It felt like it was eating up things from her mind that was kind or diff --git a/content/stories/trust.rst b/content/stories/trust.rst index 97d10c3..6a6adee 100644 --- a/content/stories/trust.rst +++ b/content/stories/trust.rst @@ -3,6 +3,7 @@ Trust :date: 2015-02-13T08:10Z :category: stories +:status: published The girl was small both in height and stature. Her blonde hair was mostly covered by a cute hat. She stared outside the bus window with dreamy blue-grey eyes. diff --git a/content/stories/white-cell.rst b/content/stories/white-cell.rst index 419aceb..f922153 100644 --- a/content/stories/white-cell.rst +++ b/content/stories/white-cell.rst @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Thomas tried even more, but he was no real opponent for the sorcerer. “Don’t call me Thomas! I hate that name. I don’t use it for years.” -“Your parents gave you that name. You shouldn’t make you sad with dropping the name they gave +“Your parents gave you that name. You shouldn’t make them sad by dropping the name they gave you. Yes, it is common and simple. But it’s not the name that will make you different from others.” @@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ when I say you are in your room.” Thomas didn’t say a word. He thought this guy is insane, or even a pervert that he keeps him here. -“Okay, so you don’t believe me. In this case let’s just assume you are in your room. Your window -used to be here, right behind me. You keep telling your disciples that visualisation is so -important. Now do it!” +“Okay, so you don’t believe me. In this case let’s just… *assume* you are in your room. Your +window used to be here, right behind me. You keep telling your disciples that visualisation is +so important. Now do it!” Thomas tried. He believed that this stranger will keep him here forever, so he had nothing to loose. Then, when he was focusing for ten minutes, the silhouettes of the window appeared on the